Your HEADLINE SUCKS!!!

A lot of guys send me their profiles to review, and time and time again, I see the same thing. Your HEADLINE SUCKS! Whether you have something generic, or flat-out garbage, this is only hurting you. My current headline is “Intelligent babe for this mad scientist.” My headline draws women in to read my profile. Leave the sub par messages, subject titles, headlines and profiles to those other lames guys. Remember, readers of the chronicles strive to be different. Let’s take a look at some of the WORST and COMMON out there and what she thinks when she reads them:

Headline: “Looking for someone special.”  

She Thinks: “Wow, who isn’t looking for someone special? Maybe everyone else is looking for losers

Reema Talk: Everyone is looking for someone special. Just because you are, doesn’t put you in different category. Everyone other guy is writing this by the way.

 

Headline: “Hmm, I don’t know what to write here.”

She Thinks: “Already stumped? The first date that was never going to happen will suck.” 

Reema Talk: Absolutely pathetic and if you can’t even think of a simple sentence, you don’t deserve a date.

 

Headline: “I need (insert anything needy)” 

She Thinks: “Wait, needy AND single? Where can I sign up?”                                                                            

Reema Talk: Real men aren’t needy. Neediness is one of the most unattractive things. Go read the needy post if you still need more reinforcement. 

 

Headline: “I will fill this out later.”

She Thinks: “Too lazy, not creative enough to even come up with a headline? That’s sexy…Not!” 

Reema Talk: Laziness is a HUGE turn off for women and a big sign of weakness.

 

Headline: “Looking for a girl who won’t hurt me.”

She Thinks: “Great, emotionally broken already? I’m staying as far away from him as possible.”

Reema Talk: This is not going to help you find a girl who won’t hurt you. You are scaring off everyone who isn’t carrying emotional baggage. Not a good look.

 

Headline: “One last try…”

She Thinks: “One last try… because you are a multiple time loser? Already on to the next.”

Reema Talk: Never talk/show weakness or failure on the internet, she’ll think it’s worse than it really is.

 

Headline:  “Insert funny headline here.

She Thinks: “Wow, it’s not like I haven’t seen that a dozen times already.”

Reema Talk: This is the sign of any person lacking any creativity. Plus, it wasn’t funny years ago when it appeared in the first place.

 

Headline: “how abot diner and drniks”

She Thinks: “This guy isn’t smart enough to spell? Or even smart enough to use a spell-check? I’ll PASS!”

Reema Talk: There is NO excuse for spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors in your headline.

Never ever use any of these headlines!  

 
    

                                                  
                         

                                                                                                  

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About The Reemachronicles

This blog is about the great NY dating scene. My focus will be on improving your overall greatness, the online dating game, some fashion tips and just other random thoughts helping guys get better with women. I will even give you updates on the current women in my life. Get on for the crazy ride that is my life.
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